Portfolio Analysis

Video #1:

Photographer: Alyssa Schukar
General Focus of Portfolio: Eating disorder/ sadness.
3 Problems Noted:
1. Not getting ay feeling from the photos.
2. Same lens no difference in distance.
3. Not enough strong singles.
2 Things judges liked:
1. Man sweeping street, good background.
2. Baseball celebration, was really good take of a common picture.
Impression of Photographer: A little dark kind of personality.

Video #2:

Photographer: Travis Haughton
General Focus of Portfolio: Genetic disorders.
3 Problems Noted:
1. Back of head should not be the main focus.
2. Head merged into a metal item in the background.
3. More frame in the photos.
2 Things Judges liked:
1. Perfectly good sport pictures.
2. 
Impression of Photographer: He goes in too tight.

Video #3:

Photographer: Nick Adams
General Focus of Portfolio: Contrast / deep. 
3 Problems Noted:
1. Out of focus.
2. Some pictures are boring.
3. Poor framing.
2 Things Judges liked:
1. Siloetes.
2. The person jumping looked like real art.
Impression of Photographer: He's trying to tell a story with his pictures.

Video #4:

Photographer: Jordan Murph
General Focus of Portfolio: Sports / action.
3 Problems Noted:
1. "Hitting the same notes" repeating photos.
2. The wave needs a surfer or a subject.
3. Focus quality and eye gets a little lost.
2 Things Judges liked:
1. Defenders arms in the shadow of the Volleyball photo.
2. Right angle yet a unique take.
Impression of Photographer: He worked hard and he likes sports.